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poems by Uriah Oxford
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Jun 18 2007, 2:53 PM EDT
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Jun 17 2007, 8:22 PM EDT
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“I gave that bone to you and you made it sharp.”
Then she cut my ankle
With that bone knife of my bone—
When I wanted to stop bleeding, I didn’t.
The blood ought to have repelled
But it drew her in---even more:
Slashing with that
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Jun 17 2007, 8:13 PM EDT
uriah
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It’s perfect.
So there we were two perfectly disconnected men drinking bad coffee
While a nation is a going through “just war stuff.”
So how’d your son die maam? “aw same ole, same ole, war stuff.”
I see.
Will you kill me please?
Yes. Let me finish this last sip.
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Jun 17 2007, 8:08 PM EDT
uriah
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Walk away I’m whole again and you wouldn’t want to suffer to know what I’ve become.
“Stop writing, stop writing on yourself with those blades.”
The feel of metal on my skin makes me big.
Big little kid—stomping into a bathroom prison;
“Knock knock?”
“Who’s there?” said
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Jun 17 2007, 8:05 PM EDT
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